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Monday, October 26, 2015

Comma Happy





Do you use too many commas? I lean in that direction, and it's always evident during the revision process. How is it that something so small can have such great power? As you know, commas indicate a natural pause and help the reader better comprehend our content. They facilitate a satisfying and enjoyable reading experience.

Here's the comma "cheat sheet" I use to keep things straight Maybe you will find it useful too.  

Use a comma to separate adjectives that equally modify a noun. 

Susan was afraid of the big, creepy spiders in the shed. 

To determine if the adjectives equally modify the noun, switch them around. If the sentence is still clear, then they modify equally. 

Susan was afraid of the creepy, big spiders in the shed. 

Use a comma between items in a series. 

Maybelle brought chips, pickles, and potato salad to the picnic. 

Do not use commas when words are separated by or, nor, or and. 

Louise washed the car and hung the laundry and watered the flowers. 

Use a comma to separate parenthetical elements in a sentence. 

Ryan entered the chapel, tardy as usual, and stood next to his bride. 

Use a comma to set off an appositive. An appositive is a word or phrase that explains something. It is not essential to the meaning of the sentence. 

Our vacation home, a rustic and cozy cabin, is located about an hour away. 

Use a comma after an introductory adverb clause. 

After the wedding, Ryan and Megan went on their honeymoon. 

Use a comma with an interjection or to set off an interruption. 

Hey, what am I supposed to do now?  Or,  For him, well, it's just better that way.   

For other comma facts, check out The Most Comma Mistakes by Ben Yagoda. 


Congratulations to C. Lee McKenzie, winner of Ann Gabhart's book giveaway! If you missed last week's fun interview, check it out here.

Are you comma happy? How's your comma quota? 

Happy writing,

Karen


Pumpkin basket photo credit: Free Images 

Monday, May 27, 2013

Memorial Day Thanks & Links




Happy Memorial Day! 

 
It isn't about picnics, sales, or an extra day off. It's about remembering the sacrifices made, and appreciating those who protect our freedom. To our veterans and those in active duty - you have our heartfelt gratitude and prayers. Thank you!


Links


Since I'm posting on Mondays for now, my monthly Thursday's This and That posts have felt neglected. Trying to think of a clever name for a similar Monday post. In the meantime, here are the links that have been clamoring for attention.  :)

Are you "cappy happy"? C.S. Lakin coined this term, and shares her wisdom on the appropriate use of capital letters in this post, Don't Get Cappy Happy.

Do you live in the Austin, Texas area?  The dates for the Writer's League of Texas 2013 Agents and Editors Conference are June 21-23. Check out the details here.

What's a Wordle? Wordle is "a toy for generating word clouds from text that you provide". It's a free, fun program that looks similar to the brainstorming method of clustering. More frequently used words appear prominently, and you can customize your text with special fonts and backgrounds. It might not help with your current writing project, but it does look like fun! Visit the Wordle site to see how it works.

Story need help? Can't figure out why? Perhaps 5 Red Flags Your Story Needs Revision by Kristen Lamb can help. She tells us how to spot and fix too many adverbs or characters and other trouble spots.

Is it okay if you split infinitives? End a sentence with a preposition? Use passive voice? Keeping up with rules and trends in writing can be tricky. Ben Yagoda offers his advice in 7 Bogus Grammar Errors You Don't Need to Worry About.







Are there any veterans or active military members in your family? 

What writing projects are you working on this week?

Happy writing,


Karen


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Photo credit image two: Stock Exchange